Hey guys, I've been putting out a lot of work lately (mainly in hopes of improving my writing style but also to be noticed) and was wondering if you could offer me some feedback! Dallas got some great responses on his dissections - really precise critiques - and would love to get the same pointers on my own breakdowns!
I'm cracking down on my tendency to write run on sentences and to diverge, but I would love to hear some more ways my writing or breakdowns can be improved!
Edit: Some readers at the UG believe I should make a pick at the end of my breakdowns. Do you believe this important?